Exquisite.
With your talent, my mind can rest easy.
The bright blueish hue of the whole thing calms my nerves easily and caringly, which makes this piece a true wonder of curiosity.
It is very rennaisance, which I find to be very ecstatic. Your use of your ability ceases not to amaze me.
The shades of the pale blue water are very design, and should not go unnoticed. You did a fine job with that water, and I know for a fact that drawing water in anime style is hard for most, but you make it seem like it is but simple to do. The shading is very effective, and that counts. Detail is incredible.
The flawless design of the structure in the back is amazing as well, for I can see everything that is intensely, yet calmingly thrust into my eyes, and the way you did it is highly respected by me. Though the castle may be blue, there is a pure-white meaning about it. The spires are expertly thought out, and the birds are beautiful. The only thing I request is that you add a swan next the young, gorgeous girl, and that brings me to my next critiquing.
The flow of the character is astonishing - absolutely no flaws. I will admit, the stars in her eyes are a bit much, but that's okay. Her hair waves out to me like a ripple in a pond, and getting that kind of result must be difficult. The skin tone is masterfully marked, which makes her even more beautiful, and that gives a bonus, because this kind thing puts a smile on my face ^_^.
The dress is really well though out. It's design could be seen in actual life, but for now, I admire the work you put into it. The way it contours and molds to her body is somewhat arousing, but hey, a little excitement goes a long way sometimes. Keep in mind, though, that this is not always the case, though it's an exception here. The color/s that you decided on for her garment is nothing short of fantastic, and it contrasts to the rest of the pick very effectively.
Last, but not least, the necklace. Pure rarity, and such a masterful design. That necklace is a sign of beauty, and marks a girl with fashion know-how. The crescent moon shape of the center piece of that pendent is remarkable and also deserves bonus points.
Extraordinary job. I await even greater things from you.