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[Maiko (Serenity)]

Nice. However...

There are a couple of things that I noticed were a tad bit out of place. But first, I want to comment on all that you've done right with this (I'm a serious critiquer, so get ready)
Aspect #1: One of my favorite things with this is the sky, and there are several reasons why: One - the color that you chose for it really matches Maiko's sitting position, so it really does bring out a serene sense that this picture can give you.
Actually, whenever I look at it, it sort of calms me down, especially if I've had a bad day, so I'm giving you bonus points for that.
Aspect #2: The facial expression. What is she feeling in here? I would really like to know, but it does make her look very cute. And the way the she sticks her arm out like that - that shows me that she is a very kind and gentle soul, especially with that butterfly coming in for a visit, which, when you think about it, is a really effective touch.
Aspect #3: We are now going to go back to the sky, only this time it's about the clouds. The detail is just amazing. How do you get that kind of effect? I've always wanted to find out, because I've never managed to get that level of precision, not even in pencil.

I also noticed that tiny little building in the background, but I just can't seem to make out what kind of Japanese structure it is. (It's the one on the right)

Aspect #4: Any pervert would go for large breasts, but I think you might have made them just a lttle too big for the rest of her torso. However, you managed to save yourself from any embarrasment (or hashly negative/crude feedback) by componsating for their size, and the way you pulled it off just stunned me like a cat to a really big dog. I just don't recommend that you do it in that way every time. Otherwise, people will think there's something wrong with you (no offense.)
Aspect #5; My favorite thing about this is the hair (just don't quote me on that.) Ever considered a career as a hair stylist? It just grabbed my attention like a moth to a light. I would also like to point out the skin tone, and there's only one thing I have to say to that: How do you get it matched up so well? I know that a lot of people often have trouble with this (which is somewhat irrelevent; I know), but you seem to have no difficulty with it whatsoever. What is your secret? Please, tell me.
Aspect #6: The clothes look absolutely professional, especially the mini-skirt. Now, I know that sounds kind of perverted, but I'm just being honest. I mean, what guy wouldn't like to be with a girl that wears mini-skirts? It's a turn-on, for crying out loud!
But I digress. I think what really brings out the elegance in the clothes is not the shirt (or the skirt), but instead, it's the shoes. Now, you're probably thinking "Why do you like the shoes so much?" For pretty much the same reason women do - it's a necessity. If the shoe fits, wear it... or get another one just like it; whichever you prefer.

Now, for the mark downs.
The first thing I noticed was the stone wall she's sitting on top of. Obvious use of repitition. It's great in some cases, but here, you kind of overdid it, so do you think you could fix that?
Same with the grass. It's not exactly how I would picture grass, and it doesn't really match the rest of the scene. Answer me this: When was the last time that you've seen a lawn where every blade is pointing in the same exact direction? It doesn't really do much good, does it?
As for the eyes; what happened? They look great, but they lack emotion. Maybe you should give them more depth. Perhaps a little sparkle to the pupils. But always keep in mind that perfect eyes can grab the attention of anyone, regardless of who they are. Also, if you work on the eyes a little more, then you direct people's attention to the eyes and away from everything else. (Yeah, I'm kind of an optical freak.)

Overall, a 4/5 and 8/10 for creativity, detail, and sheer cuteness. I love it. Could use a little more work, though. But nice job.

Vortex00 responds:

can't argue with the wall. it is due to my laziness. maybe I will come back to it later.
the grass is not pointing in the same direction, I'm not sure what you are talking about on that one. I'm not about to draw every single blade of grass lol. I will make a handful and then copy it.

I know you mean well but "lack emotion" is not a description I can understand =/
I am a very logical person and need tangible descriptions to understand things. I can add more depth though.

Thanks for the feedback. Good stuff.

[Nari Kiss]

Class 9 Ability

Out of all of your pictures, this one is above all, my favorite
It's sexy, seductive, yet at the same time, friendly and inviting.

I'm gonna have sweet, sweet dreams of fantasy tonight thanks to this portrait (I've been having nothing but nightmares for the past week.) So thank you for making this.

Tonight is going to be fun in my dreams. Maybe I'll go on a date with her.

Vortex00 responds:

^_^;

[Maiko (Glamorous)]

Beautiful

I just love your work. You are truly a master of this kind of thing.
The background is one that even I wouldn't have been able to think of. It's elegant, gracious, and above all, it matches your style effortlessly.
Now for the finer details:
The first thing I noticed was the eyes. I have look ar rhis a hundred times over, and still can't find anything wrong with it. And the eyes are just absolutely amazing. They're so... what's the word?... instilling. The expression on her face is one of a combination of shyness and innocence, yet with a sense that she is indeed a friendly and approachable gorgeous young woman.
I also like the style of the hair. It just calls out to me, asking me "How do I look?" My only response to that question is that it flows like the calmest river in a still night. It's inviting, cherishable, and highly proper for that flawless complexion.
Next up is the top. What that says to me is that she's quite a lovely young girl. It also says that she appears to be about 18 or 19, which is very appropriate indeed. The style of it is incredibly elegant, and yet surprisingly simple, and would definately catch the attention of any 14-year-old middle school boy ( especially if they fantasize about being with this girl, if you know what I mean. I know I do, but not in that manner.) And another thing, I wish my girlfriend could wear something like that. ;)
I also like the touch with the glasses, because they easily match Maiko's new style. The position of them - the way they sit sit on top her head - is just phenomonal. It's perfect.
The skin tone is also something I could never match, especially with the incredible shading detail that you put in. And besides, I know when I'm outclassed.
Last, but not least - could I say it any other way? - the sparkle. It signifies that Maiko is a friendly, popular, highly successful girl in whatever it is that she does (I've never seen the anime, so I wouldn't know), and cues up very nicely with everything else.

Overall, a true masterpiece. I'm absolutely positive that my art teacher would love to see this. Not that I would pass it off as mine. There's no way I could get away with that. I mean, I'm nowhere near as good as you.
But I digress. I think you should definately make a wallpapered version of this particular piece, with a different color background.

You are truly an Otaku Master. Do not let your talents go to waste, because people LOVE this kind of stuff.

Vortex00 responds:

thanks for the feedback :)
I was half expecting this to be filled up with lots of little nitpicking lol

[Maiko Stage Performance]

Perfection

Peace fills my psyche like water in a lake. The efervescent wonderment that which is portrayed within this master design is beyond what normal people could even hope to achieve. In a spiraling dream, I question the precision that is shown throughout. With this portrait comes inspiration, and that is what I see stirring up in all those that view this heavenly creation that you have so successfully given birth to through your imagination and superior artistic abilities.

In other words:

How do you get it so perfect?

Vortex00 responds:

patience.